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His Bed. Ominous, lace fingers waiting
You don't think so, my feet hang
So far away from my body.
My soles are sore from your traveling.
Your bed is a million miles away.
I can't fly tonight, I can't cry
The way you've seen me before.
There You Are. Something was lost.
Tides fall across your face.
The moon is eclipsing the pleasure.
When it died and I swam to the surface.
I breathed, and I breathed in you.
The edge of this bed defines me,
The edge of this ocean restricts me
In a way I thought water never could.
Here I Am. Lament the ashes,
I blow them over your exposed body
Still warm from the fires, you smile.
You take my shoulder, I take your eyes.
Ruthless and rigid, the earth falls like a pin,
I hear it hit his chest. I search for it
And ended curled against him.
There You Are. Here Am I.
I wish there was nothing else to it.
Take it however you want. That's what everyone else is doing anyways.
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Betaka Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
I love it. Wonderfully written.
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allofmyconfusion Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011   Writer
thanks
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bitybaby45 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. :+favlove:
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allofmyconfusion Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011   Writer
thank you :hug:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
It's so beautiful! Seriously great job:heart::heart::love:!!!
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aquagirl7 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010   Writer
absolutely beautiful! i especially loved the lines,

My soles are sore from your traveling.
Your bed is a million miles away.

There You Are. Something was lost.
Tides fall across your face.
The moon is eclipsing the pleasure.
When it died and I swam to the surface.

Here I Am. Lament the ashes,

Ruthless and rigid, the earth falls like a pin,

you always have a way with writing breathtaking poetry, this one made me smile :)
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Mystery-of-Brenna Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Student Writer
and isn't it what they should? Interpret?
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allofmyconfusion Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010   Writer
I meant everyone who knows me in person, you know, like how ppl interpret my relationship with this person.
i was just being moody :)
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Mystery-of-Brenna Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Student Writer
no problem, being moody is a part of the job, as a poet ... right?
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allofmyconfusion Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010   Writer
yes :D
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